Sample Paragraph: She was bored. Her lord had not needed her much for the last century or so. She was one of the best. She never failed to seduce and kill. But Asmodeus believed the best weapons were the ones least used. So she languished. At the moment she was wandering through the palace's scriptorium searching the tomes. She had recently gone through all of the legends of the abyss. Now she searched for more recent information. Know your enemies and their weaknesses.
A large ornate scrying glass hung on the wall, scanning various planes and individuals within them. A thousand imps sat at desks with individual scryers. They picked out individuals and events on their assigned planes. They wrote what they saw, each recording history in the making and the amusements and foibles of the realms they observed.
Isonduil yawned and stretched, fluttering her wings slightly. Then she felt it an insistent tugging at her being. Who would DARE reach to her in Asmodeus's realm? Who had the audacity? It did not matter who, the fact remained she was being summoned.
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Re: Isonduil « Reply #1 on Aug 28, 2007, 12:15am »
Your character is all well and good, but there is only one problem. A succubus is a demon, a creature spawned from the oozing bubbling layers of the chaotic Abyss.
Asmodeus is the lord of the Nine Hells and the fallen champion of the gods who's lot in existence is to fight the demons, along with his other 8 devil lords.
A demon would not worship or serve a devil under any circumstances. May I perhaps suggest you change her race to an Eyrines (Fallen angle that accompanied Asmodeus's decent into darkness), or perhaps find one of the numerous demon lords for her to serve under. I would suggest Graz'zt, or some other.
Joined: Aug 2007 Gender: Female Posts: 40 Karma: 1
Re: Isonduil « Reply #2 on Aug 28, 2007, 12:20am »
Is this better?
Name: Isonduil
Age: approaching 4000
Gender: Usually female, but you know how it is
Race: Infernal/Succubus/Incubus
Class: Assassin
Job: Kill whoever Graz'zt suggests needs killing.
Racial Hostility: Celestials, devils, summoners
Physical Description: demonic form [
Mental State: sane
Sample Paragraph: She was bored. Her lord had not needed her much for the last century or so. She was one of the best. She never failed to seduce and kill. But Graz'zt believed the best weapons were the ones least used. So she languished. At the moment she was wandering through the palace's scriptorium searching the tomes. She had recently gone through all of the legends of the abyss. Now she searched for more recent information. Know your enemies and their weaknesses.
A large ornate scrying glass hung on the wall, scanning various planes and individuals within them. A thousand imps sat at desks with individual scryers. They picked out individuals and events on their assigned planes. They wrote what they saw, each recording history in the making and the amusements and foibles of the realms they observed.
Isonduil yawned and stretched, fluttering her wings slightly. Then she felt it an insistent tugging at her being. Who would DARE reach to her in Graz'zt's realm? Who had the audacity? It did not matter who, she was being summoned.
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